focus group findings

1.) For the first question all of the people i asked said that in some cases it wasn't clear what type of personality some of the characters were suppose to have so it would be  a good idea to try and include more dialogue to give the characters more room for development 

2.) Everyone that i asked said that the story line seemed to be straight forward and was easy enough for them to follow and understand it without becoming confused or loosing track of what was going on

3.) Everyone asked said that the script was believable and passed as a script for a teenage based drama however some people did say that teenagers would be more talkative and that more speech could be included to show this better

4.) All people asked said that the main thing that would make them want to watch the programme would be to find out more about Emily and the background story on her and also to find out where the story line about her was leading

5.) improvements that were suggested as an answer to the last question where: more locations could of been used e.g characters could of been shown in other rooms in the college instead of just one and that it would be more interesting if the characters had more lines to say.